This is my story, -sigh- no ones really commented on it :'(, so idk if its good or not, can u gimme a hand here plz?


It was dark, pitch-black, and deadly quiet. I was only seven years old, i cringed in a conner shivering violently. Tears welled up in my hazel eyes, and rolled down my face and onto my blue night gown. My short blond hair was wild and ratty.

Then I saw a blood red glow. Two figures appeared, one was a man the other was a woman. "Mommy? Daddy?" I asked shakily. "Run sweetie" Mommy said, "Ru-" Her voice was cut off as another man-like figure slashed Mommy with a sword. She fell to the ground, dead. "Mommy!" I screamed. Around her dead body, was a pool of blood. "You bastard...." Daddy cursed. Then, the man-like figure slashed Daddy and he fell on top of Mommy's body, he too was dead.

The figure looked at me, "Come here my dear" he said. The scent of blood filled my nose. I shook my head, "No" "Come here, Jessica" the man demanded. "No!" i screamed. The man approced me, and being to scared to run, I stayed were I was. The man grabbed my arm, and once more I screamed.

"AHHHH!" I awoke with a loud scream. "Lil J?" My friend Taylor asked, "You ok?" I put my hand on my head. "I don't know, Taylor." "You were screaming in you're sleep" He said, "Something is definantly wrong." "Did I wake you?" "Yeah." I looked over at Cody, who was still asleep. "Well I didn't wake up Cody" I said.

"Of course you didn't!" Taylor laughed, "He can sleep through any thing!" "Good point" I looked at Taylor, and our eyes locked for a few seconds. His black hair glistened in the moonlight, and his navy-blue shirt looked almost black.

His legs, were under his black sleeping bag, and I my legs were in my sleeping bag. I looked away from him. Cody was all snuggled up in his sleeping bag. His dirty-blond hair looked almost brown in the moonlight. I looked away from Cody.

"It was just a dream" I thought, "Here I am with my best friends, I'm fourteen, not seven." "Jess?" Taylor asked, "Something on your mind?"

"Not really" I hoped he didn't asked about my dream. "What was your dream about?" I leaned up against a tree and hugged my legs. "I don't wanna talk about it" I said. "Ok"

"Hey, Taylor" I asked. "Yeah?" "Why did you run away like Code and I did?" I asked. I could tell i shouldn't have asked, because his eyes grew dark and angry, and sad, which was kinda wierd. "Well.." He began. "Ladies, ladies, one at a time" Cody mummbled in his sleep, "There's enough of me for everyone"

Taylor and I looked at each other, then burst out laughing......

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